Well done Nathan - this is much improved in relation to your first 60 second film. There are improvements in nearly every area and this is really pleasing.
I like the idea that you have and the narrative is simple and yet effective. There are some issues with sound levels but this is a result of ythe equipment you are able to use at this point rather than your ability.
I am pleased with the level of engagement and effort that has been put into this task. Great effort young man! I think that you have the potential to continue with your film-making in your own time and that you will be able to make further improvements by doing this.
Well done Nathan - this is much improved in relation to your first 60 second film. There are improvements in nearly every area and this is really pleasing.
ReplyDeleteI like the idea that you have and the narrative is simple and yet effective. There are some issues with sound levels but this is a result of ythe equipment you are able to use at this point rather than your ability.
I am pleased with the level of engagement and effort that has been put into this task. Great effort young man! I think that you have the potential to continue with your film-making in your own time and that you will be able to make further improvements by doing this.